Music Video: Rough Cut 2

Our second rough includes the cold-turkey, confined scene. We also experimented specifically for audience feedback by removing the 8mm footage as we are not sure whether to use it or not.



AUDIENCE FEEDBACK:
- Superb! This cut of the video was received very well by our audience, and we too agree that the video has stepped up a level.
- Callum was dubious about the shot on Malham Cove where our protagonist is laying down. He said it appeared "comical" which Jonny, Joel and thankfully(!) the audience completely disagreed with. So this shot will stay.
- The use of framing was particularly good.
- The audience wanted to see the 8mm footage again before they made any conclusive judgements on it. We will probably cut the same edit except with the 8mm included for comparison.
- The socio realist style is signified well and looks good.
- The divide on the split screen shot is not noticeable. Although as shown below some people were aware of this. We as the actual makers of the video can see the divide so will certaintly look into changing it.
- Use of HD cameras is to the full extent. Works very well on the underpass scene in particular.
- Experiment with cutting certain scenes to the beat (but don't over do it!).

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